100 Word Challenge Week 21

Their was a little girl named Mackenzie who was on a trail in the deep dark woods. The woods her parents always told her to stay out of. Mackenzie would not have gone in there if she didn’t hear a voice calling her name. She was holding her favorite bear. At first, Mackenzie was frightened because of the voice but she had the argue to go and follow it. It got louder and louder until she reached a little cottage that seemed to be falling apart. The voice was screeching and loud. It sounded like nails on a chalkboard. Then… it stop and Mackenzie’s whole world went black. What was left was her favorite white bear on the trail.

5 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge Week 21

  1. Dear Sophia,
    Wow! What a scary story! How come little kids never listen to their parent’s warnings? I love how you used a cliffhanger at the end! Maybe you can continue this story in one of your future posts. Keep up the great work!
    Mrs. Schmidt

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